Coming Closer
(let’s make that the title
      (well,
      now I’ve lost the movement of the piece
      let’s start
            again)) (ahem…

Coming Closer
   well, at least i’d like to be
                  li(e)ve it
for the purposes of poetry (I’ll even change syntaxspacing and ,grammatical
      … if t h at w I ll impress)
let’s pretend
there’s
some
   thing
greater
      more significant
      more pronounced
      something with long limbs
      and soft hands
to cradle the chaos
in
   to
    … and let’s just say that i’ll i’ve i’m
experience(d)(ing) it in whispers
which take me from sips of tea
of stars and from and of and back again
and quietly
in the rural awakening i flutter shutter
   aside: it’s almost as if
      written wants feel remembered
      even,   at    times, true

and thereupon a diverging … moon
i am maintained motioned meaned cut divided
      to a common denominator
      to a place i can speak of/from
         a place worth speaking of/from
(wouldn’t that be
nice?)

By Gee he said OM
            (G)
!
but, really I find
It’s Just As Easy To Break Something New
            (No) It’s Much
            Easier To
B r e a k so       m e
         thin g New
Than It Is To Build It
      (and quite satisfying)
oops. why am i telling you this?

I’m supposed
      to come closer
      to make it somewhere
      to find value
      and to sell it
Well then,    (for the kids)
It’s A Much Greater Thing To Build Something New
      Than It Is
            To Break It
And then… Okay,,
Here’s some more :

Yeah (too informal ,excuse me) Yes
,       i felt it:
that ancient thing people feel
people talk about
people believe
and i held on
i didn’t let it go
i didn’t discard it
(won’t you look at me! it really happened
      and it me
         ant
      soooomuch
      i even wear a necklace as a reminder
      and it works
      it totally works! you should try it)!
      (i’m be
         side my
            self!
I) journeyed and it was the journey that count…
I made it to the final
be
au
ti
ful
end
i
n
g
(and all that sort of thing)
which seems
to end things
beautiful things
moments movies stanzas Paragraphs
etc: coffeecups notebooks trainstations

i was lifted
let’s pretend
you be the one who’s listening and
i’ll be the one who’s come back to tell you a story
from the other side

Coming Closer
Coming
Close
   r
    e
turning
for the purposes
a       side: i can almost live with chaos(myself )when i pretend
poetry moves people,       right ?
it says something needing    saying ?

yeah,    !    (hey ho!) let’s go
with
that
idea
!