Coming Closer
(let’s make that the title
(well,
now I’ve lost the movement of the piece
let’s start
again)) (ahem…

Coming Closer
well, at least i’d like to be
li(e)ve it
for the purposes of poetry (I’ll even change syntaxspacing and ,grammatical
… if t h at w I ll impress)
let’s pretend
there’s
some
thing
greater
more significant
more pronounced
something with long limbs
and soft hands
to cradle the chaos
in
to
… and let’s just say that i’ll i’ve i’m
experience(d)(ing) it in whispers
which take me from sips of tea
of stars and from and of and back again
and quietly
in the rural awakening i flutter shutter
aside: it’s almost as if
written wants feel remembered
even,   at    times, true

and thereupon a diverging … moon
i am maintained motioned meaned cut divided
to a common denominator
to a place i can speak of/from
a place worth speaking of/from
(wouldn’t that be
nice?)

By Gee he said OM
(G)
!
but, really I find
It’s Just As Easy To Break Something New
(No) It’s Much
Easier To
B r e a k so       m e
thin g New
Than It Is To Build It
(and quite satisfying)
oops. why am i telling you this?

I’m supposed
to come closer
to make it somewhere
to find value
and to sell it
Well then,    (for the kids)
It’s A Much Greater Thing To Build Something New
Than It Is
To Break It
And then… Okay,,
Here’s some more :

Yeah (too informal ,excuse me) Yes
,       i felt it:
that ancient thing people feel
people talk about
people believe
and i held on
i didn’t let it go
i didn’t discard it
(won’t you look at me! it really happened
and it me
ant
soooomuch
i even wear a necklace as a reminder
and it works
it totally works! you should try it)!
(i’m be
side my
self!
I) journeyed and it was the journey that count…
I made it to the final
be
au
ti
ful
end
i
n
g
(and all that sort of thing)
which seems
to end things
beautiful things
moments movies stanzas Paragraphs
etc: coffeecups notebooks trainstations

i was lifted
let’s pretend
you be the one who’s listening and
i’ll be the one who’s come back to tell you a story
from the other side

Coming Closer
Coming
Close
r
e
turning
for the purposes
a       side: i can almost live with chaos(myself )when i pretend
poetry moves people,       right ?
it says something needing    saying ?

yeah,    !    (hey ho!) let’s go
with
that
idea
!